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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The musculature and anatomy, how well you drew the same creatures from different angles, the shadow work and lighting, the overall composition and sense of motion, the story it tells... this is killer stuff. Seriously, I think there's a lot of professionally done comic book art out there that doesn't look this good. This is a fantastic scene! I could sing it's praises all day, I really could. That wouldn't do you much good besides swell your ego though, so here are my thoughts on how you could make this even better:
- One, I'm just curious, what's the pale green shape in the lower right corner? It looks to me like the mouth of some dead creature, but if so I guess I don't know why it's that color. Is it meant to be glowing? Clearing that up would be nice.
- The gums of the Marauders could use more definition. The green one closest to us is fine but I think the paler ones on Jovis' back could use more detail there, especially the one on the right whose gums are just a solid color. I think the same could be said of their teeth and claws. Everything else seems to have at least subtle shading, but they don't; it makes them seem flatter than the rest of the image.
- I'm not 100% sure on this, but I do think the Marauder leaning over Jovis' shoulder would probably have a stronger shadow than that. It looks like he's right in the path of the sunbeams lighting the scene, so if so he'd be casting a much bigger, darker shadow than what he's got now.
- Just a minor thing, but I think the inside of Jovis' mouth could use more detail. It looks pretty smooth as it is.